Share a Haiku

The koi enjoys the spring showers.
The koi fears nothing.
The koi thinks it will live forever.
The koi never retreats.
The koi gets eaten by the snakefish.

whats a haiku?

It's a 5 sentence poem like I posted above.

Swept across the ocean's waves at night.
Not another human soul in sight.
I felt the oceanspray on my face.
As upon the starlit sky I gazed.
I sighed with the subtle whisper of the waves.

Side Note: Please don't judge this poem too critically, because it's been many years since I've even bothered to try composing. Plus, I only spent approximately 4 1/2 minutes producing this.

Very good.

WiiAboutU wrote:Swept across the ocean's waves at night.
Not another human soul in sight.
I felt the oceanspray on my face.
As upon the starlit sky I gazed.
I sighed with the subtle whisper of the waves.

Side Note: Please don't judge this poem too critically, because it's been many years since I've even bothered to try composing. Plus, I only spent approximately 4 1/2 minutes producing this.

thats actually good dude.

Thanks for your acceptance guys.
I'll try an produce some more poems for this thread in the future. Although, it might take some time to get my creative juices flowing again.

Once there was a Lord.
Who went by the name Tretton.
Who spent his days bashing Nintendo.
One day he angered the lords of a website.
He was banned for 30 days.

Rukiafan wrote:Once there was a Lord.
Who went by the name Tretton.
Who spent his days bashing Nintendo.
One day he angered the lords of a website.
He was banned for 30 days.

All hail the Lords of Wiiwarewave

LOL nice one